Wednesday, August 31, 2011

Something (relatively) Old, Something (relatively) New

You get two poems today! Yay! So one of them I wrote a long, long time ago, and one of them I wrote last week. Some of you will probably recognize the old one. And yes, the new one is incredibly mushy (I'm sorry. Actually, no, I'm not sorry at all (I may be a little shy, though)).


9/25/07

Paper flowers

The silver wishes are tarnished

The hopes are now flown away

The sincerity is gone forever

The roses fade to grey

All seem as paper flowers-left too long in rain

Of insubstantial worth and always full of pain



8/24/11

Scared/Elated (in Love)

My heart is pounding out of my chest

my dreams last night were full of death

but that is merely the symptom

of a much larger problem

(I think I'm in love)



I gave you the letter

and now I don't know if it was the better

thing to do, now there is a hole in my stomach

and I'm not hungry for anything except Nectarines

(I told you I'm in love)



I'm so scared of what your reaction will be

I'm so elated about the signals you're sending

I'm so scared that I've been imagining you and me

I'm so elated about the possibility that you and I

may be in love; might be in love (I hope we're in love)



We communicate in song lyrics

that my brother wrote and sang

and it's so sweet to be your friend

to share these memories and thoughts with you

(I love you)



The look in my eyes is full of such tenderness

when I think of you

and when I talk about you

I positively shine and glow



They say being in love makes you beautiful

well, they say correctly

If I'm beautiful now

it's because I love you



3 comments:

  1. Paper Flowers! I still have my paper flowers poem from the same day. Good times, writer's group.

    "and I'm not hungry for anything except Nectarines" = awesome line.
    This poem is kind of musical, in a singing-and-dancing-onstage kind of way.
    Also, you're freaking adorable, mushiness notwithstanding (or, actually, adding to your adorableness. Do you mind that I'm calling you adorable?) ^_^

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  2. I mean, I've been called adorable lots of times over the past year. I'm okay with it (actually, I kind of like it).

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  3. "Mushy"... I never thought I'd come to appreciate such an adjective as much as I now do.

    I love you, Hannah.

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